Teen Poetry #3 |
The Tempest Travels with Me |
MidnightPoet New Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 2 |
I started this poem several months ago when i was feeling overwhelmed and haunted by typical teenage life. I've finished it now and i hope you enjoy! Also, my other name on Passion's is Heidi, so check out my other first poem, The Scent of Ashes. Thanks! I am the wind swept gull Above a stormy sea Angry water churns as i flee- Away! Away from here Do not come near The tempest travels with me! Refuge exists within a tumultuous eye In from the wind and salt i fly Into this gentle place of icy warmth and lethal grace Below! Soaked canvas sparkles, Trembling between gails Trapped within wave and wind, ivory sails With troubled mind, i collapse with ease onto weathered wood, away from the seas A dark figure above me coos Then damp heat envelopes my grey soul Though now safe and warm, the flight has taken its toll I am greatful, yet yearn to be free For i know what comes next- The tempest travels with me! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well, I see we've welcomed you already into the fold Midnight Poet ... I remember your post as Heidi, very nice writing. This is a beautifully descriptive verse Heidi/Midnight Poet. You've painted a wonderful oceanic vision ... lovely indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so gorgeous and written with obvious talent! Keep up the excellent work, I'll be looking for more! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Brilliant...my kind of poem, the whole of it is what i call 'magical' keep posting "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Absolutely beautiful! I admire your talent and your passion. From one writer to another, I commend you. Peace out. *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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