Teen Poetry #3 |
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Girl In My Dreams |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Well...last poem before I get to the beach. I've always wanted to write about the girl in my dreams. Good Lord, I'm getting goosebumps about writing this. I saw Bristol for years in my dreams....then I finally met her. Damn, whoa...*has major goosebumps* < !signature-->"Girl In My Dreams" There you were Wild and free Reaching out like you needed me With your beautiful hair Looking so proud standing there Looking at me You have been what I seen You are the girl in my dreams When I first saw you I thought I was in heaven I saw love You were smiling Your eyes were like the sunshine And when I thought about it I knew then and there You would be mine As beautiful as it seems, You are the girl in my dreams You are beautiful For years I have seen you And it was awesome by all means For years I have wanted to know you Every night in my dreams I could feel your gentle hands caressing me Every night in my dreams I could hear your sweet voice whispering to me For years you have been the girl in my dreams I have finally found you And baby, still, it seems like a dream You with that long, brown hair Looking so beautiful standing there Come to me, baby For love is something we both will bare You opened the door And it isn't a dream any more You have been the girl in my dreams And now it's reality, or so it seems -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." [This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Alex, I loved it. I hope you share this with her. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Alex, You have a talent to express true emotion keep it up loved the poem |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
Hey that sounds like my poem THE BOY IN MY DREAMS. Thats a really good poem I like it. ~*~Minna~*~ ![]() ![]() ((Peace out)) ~*~Fairy Princess~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Nicely done Alex!!I hope she reads this because it is beautiful!! I'm glad you have found the girl from your dreams!! Best of luck to you! ![]() ![]() *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a beautiful poem...and whoever this girl is should read this...you should let her know just how special she is to you...i dont know what color you used but i had to highlight the whole poem just to read it...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Heh...I modified the HTML code to get the color....heh, and if you have the font, the font should have been Galant, and not Arial. Oh by the way, I'm home from the beach. -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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