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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
A young man battles on struggling through the pain his confidence is almost gone you can barely see it if you strain what shall he become he asks the stars above will he be old and lonesome or be happy with a true love will all his dreams come true and make his life content or even just one or two to give his fears and worries vent how many mistakes will he make or different times will he sin will his soul be full of lies so fake or will his morals overcome and win will his mind gain strength and believe in himself once more or will his failures grow in length and push him down against the floor will he lay there like a fool and ball himself up in utter fear crying himself up a pool made from tear after tear or will he stand against the world and let out a mighty roar that makes an iron beam grow curled to say excuse me, do you have any more i wrote this a while ago when i was still unhappily with my exgirlfriend and scared of the future |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I am glad that I can be the first to post a reply. Firstly I would like to welcome you to passions, this is a brilliant first post. I hope that things worked out in the end and you are no longer feeling that uncertainty regardless of whether you two are still together (it says 'ex' so I suppose you're not). Love can been a cruel thing. But we have to learn to get on with our lives ant not let love run over us. Keep up the great writing. Love Always, Shell. Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me ~Beautiful~ ~Creed~ |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Like I'm reading this and I'm thinking-gees how did this guy get inside my brain- my fears- my life? This one really touches base in a lot of ways-keep up the great writing --you got my vote! I seek to be me- and all I can be! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Sherm! This is a wonderful first post, full of questions and longing for answers. Hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I'm glad to hear that you are no longer unhappy sherm!! Keep up the writing, it helps doesn't it? Keep your head up and leave your eyes on your goals-what ever they might be. (because obstcales are those scary things we see when we take our eyes off our goals...right?) Best of luck my friend. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. welcome to passions!! *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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