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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-07-19 03:34 PM

My heat is torn in two,
Tell me, what can I do?

Marlon’s always been there,
But he doesn’t seem to trust.

Albert is there to talk,
But just so far away.

I just can’t seem to choose.
Why must it be so hard?

Marlon says he loves me,
But whats love without trust?

Albert was there that night,
The night I lost all hope.

Why must this heart of mine,
Play with my mind and soul?

Marlon just doesn’t know,
What I hold in my heart.

Albert was in my dreams,
And I showed him myself.

My heart is tied in knots,
Trying to get things strait.

Marlon doesn’t know,
That this is killing me.

Albert knows I'm confused,
But doesn’t know hes why.

I must decide between,
But it’s impossible.

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*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-07-19 03:37 PM

Life is hard, but always remember if you really need to talk try family first. Great poem hope to read more of you wrok

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

2 posted 2000-07-20 11:33 AM

Your situation really sucks. When put in this place, I went with the one who knew my heart the best. I was right. We aren't togethor, but she is my best friend in the world, and the one person on this planet that I really trust. Good luck, I hope I helped.

Jason

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2000-07-21 04:19 AM

A great poem.
Keep up the great writing.

Love Always,
Shell.

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

4 posted 2000-07-21 07:37 PM

You did great on wording this. Keep up the great work!
Kittie

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-07-22 07:12 PM

well the poem was nicely worded...however the situation is icky! On this one I would have to say listen to your heart...and if in your heart, you can't find the answer then befriend both of them, but don't choose. They both have given you reasons not to be with them...whether it be trust or miles between you two. Maybe you need to find someone who can give you what you need, not just half of what you need. at any cost, I hope you make the right decision for your heart. Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-02 08:29 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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