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An Unforgettable Friendship
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An Unforgettable Friendship |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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An Unforgettable Friendship Friends shouldn't have to say good~bye, you had some things to say and so did I. We did lots of things together and yes we did have fun, like going to the beach and playing in the sun. Friends wouldn't have to say good~bye, all I ask myself is why? All the memories both good and bad, looking back it makes me feel so sad. Friends don't have to say good~bye, but the things you said make me want to cry. We grew up together doing lots of things, But soon enough I felt like a puppet while you were playing with my strings. Friends can't say good~bye, while thinking back on you and I. You were my trusted friend, on you I thought I could depend. Friends do sometimes say good~bye, so wipe your tears and dry your eyes. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I could've sworn I replied to this poem. Oh wellers guess I'm a dork. lol  This is very sad, Im sorry you've had to go through this. I know how it is to lose a best friend. But everything usually works out for the best. Keep your head up! Love ALways~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
How I missed this I have no idea. I do remember reading it though. Must only be deja vu.....Sorry to say this Erin, but friends do say goodbye. Only real friends stay together. And it's pretty hard to find one. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sad but true, i feel bad for ya, none the less, this was a great emotional poem, i loved: "Friends do sometimes say good~bye, so wipe your tears and dry your eyes." jeremy r |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sorry, i posted twice by accident, i erased the second one [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hate saying good-bye to good friends. Change can be soooooo hard to deal with. Especially when you grow apart from a best friend, you know you should let go but you really dont want to. Your poem was great...it brought reality to the ending of friendships...the unfortunate reality that is. But you expressed it amazingly. Great job! I loved the poem =o) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job but i do hate saying bye to friends. Especially the ones the are close. Anyway good job  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
This poem almost had me in tears. I know how it is to lose a best friend. I just lost one of my best friends I've ever had. And I still don't know how to deal w/ it. Sometimes it feels like a bad dream I am just waiting to wake up from. Well sorry for rambling. Great poem, I loved it. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more from you. Much Luv, Priscilla ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
yeah, i hate losing friends too. But since I want to see it as an optimistic thing (i dunno, i'm not even in a good mood today either, but i just had this thought...) I will give my opinion that you're not losing a friend, you're making room for a closer one. ok, now that I typed it, it seems not as good as when I thought it, but I don't want to go back and erase it. But anyway, good poem, it really got your feelings across to me! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey babycakes! LOL just kidden  OK well now for the poem..this was great. and boy do i know how hard it is to lose friends. one of my bestfriends and i have taken like 100 "breaks from each other" cause we get to the point where we fight about EVERYthing. but i always look at our friendship as being unique and one of a kind because we've been through so much together and we're still friends. so i hope all works out well, nice to talk to ya again! take care<3 ya~! Kiley "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey babycakes! LOL just kidden OK well now for the poem..this was great. and boy do i know how hard it is to lose friends. one of my bestfriends and i have taken like 100 "breaks from each other" cause we get to the point where we fight about EVERYthing. but i always look at our friendship as being unique and one of a kind because we've been through so much together and we're still friends. so i hope all works out well, nice to talk to ya again! take care<3 ya~! Kiley "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
To all that replied...This was the 1st poem I ever wrote...And at the time it was just for a class assignment...But about 2 months later I lost 2 of my best friends because I was being stubborn...But then after months of not talking we became friends again...Thank you all for taking the time out to read and respond to my poem...I really appreciate it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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