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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I’d rather be me Than ever be you Only because of The things you do Let me be myself Allow me to stay I'm not changing I'll remain this way Try what you must You can’t change me For I am stronger And you will see I'm left stranded Under the bright sun You’ve died off Now your all done Stronger will stands Evil is now dead I'm now in peace Just as I had said Someone will come Like the one before Down they will fall Like there is no more Jeremy Raulinaitis 10/22/00 "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, this is great, really. I don't know what else to tell you....keep it up k? Hasta luego Bel |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I absolutely loved this one!! I've read a lot of your poems and this is one of my fav. Being yourself is sooooo important. I think you sent out an important message in this one. Good job!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job, a short syllabled style that i use at times. Message was good.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Let me be myself Allow me to stay I'm not changing I'll remain this way" I like the determination in these words, like you are fighting a battle and have to be strong against people changing you. Good poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey babe! told ya id get to this one. WELL..this rocked! ure words always hold so much confidence in them. i love your poems, keep up the great work! <3** Kiley "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
thanks a lot, it means a lot, im glad to hear im a confident person  jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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