Teen Poetry #3 |
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Thinking of You |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA ![]() |
I cant stop thinking of you Your beauty captivating my mind Surrounding it Filling it with dreams Fantasies About you I cant seem to think about anything else Nothing strays my mind From you You are everything to me My world around me And inside of me You are peace Love Beauty Everything that counts Everything that make you who you are I want to be with you Your voice captivates my heart Your love controls my thoughts You are the goddess of love The queen of beauty You are of a rare type Not many like you Which makes you more beautiful And more priceless A buried treasure Unlike any in the world today I am glad I found you I grateful to know you I am lucky to share your love *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A happy story Ender, glad to hear you are in love! It is such a wonderful thing and I hope that you are genuinely happy with your new found treasure. Keep up the wonderful writing, and best of luck to you in life and love!! ![]() *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I don't think that there is anything I can say other than WOW!!!!!!!!!! That poem is most likely one of the best I have read in the past few days, and I have been cramming my mind full of poetry. There are so many feelings and expressions in this poem that some of us can only drem of feeling all at one time. I'm glad that you have found someone that can make you feel like that. My advice now is to not let her go!! But you have to keep up the great writing I will look forward to reading more from you. Love Always, Shell |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Beautiful poem Ender! The recipient of your love is one very lucky lady indeed ... I hope you were able to share this treasure with her! Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem once again. Keep it up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
just like a fairy tale...with a very happy ending...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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