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*Rainmaker* (for everyone who has ever felt alone)
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*Rainmaker* (for everyone who has ever felt alone) |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I wrote this about a year and a half ago for some friends who were going through hard times, but it's really for anyone who needs to be reassured that we are all unique, special, and BEAUTILFUL people. Thanks for reading  ~~Kandi/Kris~~ **Rainmaker** When you feel like all your hopes and all your dreams are forever lost, I will find them and give them back to you. When you think that that far off star will never be reached, I will take your hand and pull you into the light. When it feels like everything is slipping away, and you think your dream world isn’t close enough to get to, I will wake you up and show you that you are already there. When it seems as if you have nothing to gain and everything to lose, I will give you the strength you need to risk it all. When you are soaring so high that there is nowhere for you to go but down, I’ll be standing in your shadow, waiting to break your fall. When you hit the bottom and think all hope is gone, I’ll be standing over you, reaching out to help pull you back up on your feet. When is seems as if nothing is left and your soul has gone dry, I’ll be your rainmaker. And when you start to cry because it feels like you were never good enough, I’ll be there, telling you that you were never anything less than beautiful. ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
This is so beautiful!! It's a very sweet and inspirational poem, sure to let the person it was written for know how much you care. Sometimes poetry is a great outlet to express to someone how much you care. Because sometimes it seems like no one does. Great job, I'm impressed by alot of your work. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
You wanna know something?... If there were more friends out there like you and me, there world would be a better place..I've come to realize that in my damn old age. So often, we give ourselves for the happiness of friends, and just as often our friends can't find the love inside to do the same. I don't know if it's like that for you, but something tells me it is. I noticed that the last lines of your poetry always hit hard, I like that....If you ever need to feel beatiful, you can email, I'm full of hope and wisdom. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I like this one, it givce me so miuch hope for this big bad world  )Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, Heartfelt, and inspirational. I could use a friend like you, and so can many others . Great Job~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is so beautiful...it's like a song. Sometimes when you give so much and you don't get the same back it kinda hurts... Anyway keep writing! "You could be my unintended Choice, to live my life extended...." Muse "Even when we're apart we'll still be under the same sky," LJ Smith "Hiding in the musty attic is Elusive She sits, cross legged in a midst dark cobwebs Several forms scurry to seek shelter Beneath her levitating shadow. Her back rigid , eyes glassy Gazes intently at time escaping Sliding, smoothly, as sand sprinkles Through the hour glass, A single tear grazes her misty cheek." Lani |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
excellently versed. i liked it a lot. very heroic. saving someone from loneliness is one of the best feelings that exists. good work. i dig it. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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