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Rachel Turner Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16Judsonia, Arkansas |
I love you because you care I love you because your there I love you because you lend a helping hand I love you because you make me feel like this might be real I love you even though your not mine But i pray you will be in time!!! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Rachel, that was beautiful. I hope that you find that person. Keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
Aww.. this is a really cute poem. =) Must be a special guy to inspire this! |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, great poem. I've never read such a short poem that got the message across in such a powerful way. I do hope that he realizes how you feel, I'm sure that any guy would be lucky to have a girl like you. You sound like he is really important to you and you shouldn't let him go. One day he will see you and then he will never let you go. Love Always, Shell. |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
R.T., Love can be so wonderful, yet elusive and sometimes downright frustrating--but hang in there girl-I think it's worth the investment. the Kid I seek to be me- and all I can be! |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I must say, short but sweet. I like it a lot! I've felt like this way too many times in my life. I hope everything works out for you~ Best of luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
love is, by definition, a deep fondness of someone or something invoked by the strong bond of caring, compassion, devotion, and often trust...not exact definition, but really close...this poem does the defined sentiment justice, nice job. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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