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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-07-19 01:04 AM


I know you might of been hurt bad ,
But I can take away your pain and fears
Just let me into your world and share you love with me
Iam the guy to that would change your world
Because I just realized that your the girl for me


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Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-19 09:14 PM


Hey nice poem, keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

heartbroken
New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 9

2 posted 2000-07-25 11:28 AM


i reallt like thi spoem. I wish i could find a guy thst felt this way about me! Keep up the good work )
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-26 01:58 AM


well lets just say if we could change some things on this it would be perfect....for me to give to my boyfriend that is...whoever this girl is must be really special...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-03 08:29 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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