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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Down a dark hallway I wander With no hope of turning back to the light Where I came from So pure and innocent I was. Now I walk in the heart of darkness Searching for my place in life. I beg and plead Accept me for who I am Reject me for who I will never be. Look into these blue eyes Tell me what you see. Do you see a girl with no hope, No dreams, No aspiration to be the best she can be? Is there hope for me, In this big, cruel world? Do I dare to believe That I can be set free? Do I dare to achieve The goals set by me? Down a dark hallway I wander With no hope of turning back to the light... "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Rachel Turner Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16Judsonia, Arkansas |
Good poem! Very good written! Keep it up!! love, Rachel |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
hey nice poem just kep on smiling you'll find the right path , but can you edit the reply to distrust iam a guy...  hope to read more of your stuff |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Bravo!!!! Bravo!!!! You have truly caught the essence of hopelessness here. The questions, the detail, and the perfect anologies were great....you really pulled the idea off wonderfully....excellent job!! Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Hey man I appreciate the edit hope you write more good stuff nad hopefuly you will read more of mine :P |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Thanks!! Hey TrueLUV......I look forward to reading more of yours! "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
This too shall pass....for where there's hope, there is a light. -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
I really love this poem... your use of words is excellent.. the expression is great.. I think we've all questioned our value at one time or another.. you captured it! =) ~Mel~ -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Hope is very important in the world we live in today, but I msut admit that sometimes, hope isn't easy to find. However that light will always find us again. And it will always carry us out. Keep up the great writing. Love Always, Shell. |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Some times life seems so hopeless- especially when you are trying to do the right thing for you- and others are kicking you down-- but don't give up Phoebe--"to thine own self be true..." the Kid I seek to be me- and all I can be! |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hey. This is a great poem. The message is very good. Keep up hope....everything will work out! Keep writing and have fun! Love ya Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This was a wonderful poem. There will always be a light on at the end of the hallway. Sometimes we just have a very long hallway to walk through to get there. Keep up the great writing. "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
Good poem. I know just how you feel. I feel like no one is like me and sometimes it bothers me but just remember that it can be cool too. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Someone once told me "hope is what makes us sad" this is true, but at the times when you are most sad, the only thing that gets you through it all is hope. So keep your head up and don't lose hope for he who loses hope loses all. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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