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LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-07-19 11:21 AM

I wish I could touch you
But you sit there so damn regally
So distant from this world
And I never can
I've listened to your thoughts
Your plans to rise above it
But your words are so hollow
That I fear you may have fallen
Into insanity
Please look back upon your life
Remember all the times we've shared
The tears I poured into your hands
Our secret pact of friendship
When you descend from your higher plane
I want to be there
Waiting for you
That I might take your hand
After we have faded
I know you'll be grateful
I know you'll accept your heart
My mysterious prince
And until that hour
Thirst not with your mouth
But with your soul
For you are He
Whom I have searched for all this time

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-07-19 04:31 PM

Beautiful LF!! I had to read it over twice it amazed me so much! your work truly is wonderful!! Keep it up...and as for the situation, my heart is with ya!! best of luck~ Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-07-19 10:06 PM

Thank you very, Very, VERY much!!

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

3 posted 2000-07-20 11:28 AM

What is with us writing poetry about each other? I don't know...hehehe. Well anyway this is quite an astounding piece and I hope that all your dreams come true.

Jason

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-07-20 07:56 PM

Absolutely beautiful LyricFetish! Very well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2000-07-20 11:14 PM

"And until that hour
Thirst not with your mouth
But with your soul" -- Very powerful words here! Overall, a well done piece of work! Keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-07-21 02:15 PM

Hey guys, thanks for your support. I really don't know what to do about this poem, meaning the subject matter. Boys are so friggin complicated!!!! Well, anyways, be real people.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-12-02 08:25 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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