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Longing for Love |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
Longing for Love I have long yet waited For a beautiful woman to love This feeing I have inside Lingurs for my one true love I've tried and tried to love Many, many times before But nothing ever worked out My delicate heart always tore I wish to find someone Loving, caring and kind I hope she comes to me soon Or I may lose my mind I want to feel the love I see everywhere I go All those couples in love This I want to know I'm sure she'll come Either tomorrow or in a year But what if she doesn't come That's my greatest fear Escaping this brutal pain Is my only dream And walking next to her Under a warm moon beam All those nights waisted Crying endlessly in my bed And if I do not find her I think I'd rather be dead I want to be able To dream of her at night And having her be my First and last sight Waking up next to her Is a fantasy in itself And to look at her face In a picture on the shelf |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
"Waking up next to her.. Is a fantasy in itself" Quel romantique! =) I love this poem.. few guys will spell out their feelings like this.. when you do find that girl.. she better realize how lucky she is! Amazing poem!=) -Mel- -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey, I know exactly how you feel. My only advice, don't let her hurt you. jason |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Great Poem! One day you'll find the perfect girl...until then...be patient (easier said than done, I know) All good things come to those who wait. I know it's lonely and I know it's hard...but you'll find her and you'll be happy as ever! Keep writing...it helps...A LOT!! Best of luck, my heart is with you. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
What can I say - Wow! As a girl myself I know what it means to find out there are such romantics still out there, that romance isn't dead. Today so many guys believe that love is making out in the backseat of a car, and it hurts them when they realize that it's not love at all. What were they thinking! The world needs more guys like you, more guys that know the true meaning of love. I'm sure that you'll find that girl one day, I know that you will. I am a firm believer in the thinking that there is only one TRUE LOVE out there for each of us. There may be others who make us happy, but there is only one TRUE LOVE. That is very important to belive, but in the mean time, don't be afraid to have a little fun with someone that makes you happy. The best advice I can give you, is keep smiling and never give up! Love Always, Shell. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey, I know this feeling all to well. Just keep your head up. Like Jess said "Good things come to those who wait" and I think it is true. Well keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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