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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... 
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You said that you’re my lover, That you will never die, You told me that you’re invincible, How could I believe a lie? You said that you’re a star, Shining brightly in the sky, You told me that you’re my angel, I know I shouldn’t question why. You said that you’re my only, You’ll be there to the end, You told me that you’re my sweetest dream, A helping hand you’ll always lend. You said that you were forever, That you would never die, You told me you were invincible, And I believed your lie. Now you’re gone like a robber in the night, Stealing my heart and my passion in one, How do I live, how do I go on, Knowing that your time is done. Now they only place I can go, To remember the good times and even the bad, Is a place so lonely, cold and gray, A place I wish you never had. On you grave I stand, Praying to the sky, Whispering my question, Why did you have to die? |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Your poems is extremeley touching I know how it feels to loose someone you cared for I lost my grandfather in '96. Iam sorry hope to read more poetry from your heart and soul and smile  |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh AngelShell, this so beautifully written and so terribly sad. I'm so sorry for your loss ... you've expressed your heartfelt emotions well in this verse. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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