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Rachel Turner Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16Judsonia, Arkansas |
My friend, I would like to ask you this question today, Have you ever been in love with someone you know you can't have??? Have you ever even felt this Way?? Have you ever begged someone to stay, only to see them turn and walk away? Does your heat fall apart everytime you see him with that other girl?? And do you ever wish you were part of his world?? Does it make you sad when you think of the love ya'll once had? Well my friend, the only thing i have left to say is I wish i knew how to tell him, I want what we once had back again!!! |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Hey Rachel, I think this is a great poem and describes how you feel very well. I know exactly how you feel and It is so sad... I hope things go your way. Keep writing. Great poem!!!! |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Great poem. So many questions..... "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
hey i think its a great poem you should always exprees yourself. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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