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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Music To My Ears My one and only love Tell me why you distrust me so Why do you always listen to your friends Why is your heart not open to me Can't you see that love in me Love has finally struck the key for me Why do you deprive me of love for you Why do you keep me from feeling heaven with you When you cried out my name that night I saw and heard the angels cry You are that angel that heart o' mine Does that mean nothing, but the taste of red wine It's not wine your tasting it's the blood of my heart does this mean the angel's have played their last love note for me Is it over for you and me |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Whoah!! Maybe one day she will show her love and be more open towards you. Girls are very strange. I loved the poem.< !signature--> "Everything happens for a reason!" [This message has been edited by Phoebee (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post. Check your e-mail for a special message!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions TruLUV! You've expressed some strong emotions in this poem, this is a wonderful first post! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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