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smoothie
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 4


0 posted 2000-07-25 02:54 PM


I never thought that I would feel such an attraction every moment I spend with you my knees leave me feeling weak, my stomach turns and my heart is giving me the feeling of hope.  

I just want you to know that I'll be there through thick and thin until that neer ending moment of true love, when Iam with you I feel as if time is standing stilland that the night will never end,but the fact remians for now we are still just friends from me to you I've loved you from the start as a friend and as someone special and I care and I thought you should know  

© Copyright 2000 smoothie - All Rights Reserved
LoveLess1
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 5

1 posted 2000-07-25 02:58 PM


Thats so sweet to say to some1 that u really care about.  I hope things work out 4 u 2 in the future.  Good Luck!!!
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-07-25 04:02 PM


I like this sincere expression of love and friendship.

Sincerely
A_L

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 04:54 PM


)
this is a really cute poem
this person must be pretty special to ya!! i have a couple friends like that myself!
keep them coming!!
Love Ya Bunches
    ~Jen~
        

TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-07-25 04:59 PM


Greg great piece it was good to be a part of this piece of the truth hopefully you read all the replies you got see ya tomorrow  
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-25 10:22 PM


Welcome to Passions Smoothie!

A feeling of hope and love is a beautiful thing ... lovely thoughts and feelings!

Hope to see more from you - check your e-mail for a special message.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
6 posted 2000-07-25 11:53 PM


i liked it a lot!! i've often had those same feelings!! i hope to read more by you and i hope you will read mine and comment on them!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.

LoveLess1
New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 5

7 posted 2000-07-26 12:34 PM


greg nice work. that is so cute, how u wrote a poem for her. she is lucky!! she is really lucky to have someone like you like her as much as u do. i hope things turn out good for u.  see you soon.  goodluck!!  )
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
8 posted 2000-07-26 02:32 AM


whoever you wrote this poem for should feel really special...i wish you the best of luck with this person...

welcome to passions...i hope you enjoy it here as much as i do...


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-12-03 09:37 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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