Teen Poetry #3 |
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Does Anyone Care? |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Nobody cares, Nobody even dares. Nobody sees me, They see what they want to see. Nobody cares, Here comes more nightmares. Nobody looks inside to see, A poor boy in need like me. Nobody seems to care, Then why do I dare? To make do with what I've got. Sit here in the sun so hot, Burn does my soul. Take me outta this God for saken hole!! DOESN'T ANYONE CARE?? |
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wwjd168 New Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 3 |
What is Love? 1 Corinthians 13 Jesus is love, and He cares! John 3:16 God Bless you! ![]() -peter |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I know the feeling but remember there are people out there who do care.... and just when you think that there is no way up, someone always tosses a rope!! if you ever need to talk, send an emial my way... take care of yourself, and great writing. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Nice work. Even when it seems like nobody cares, there iz ALWAYS someone who does. Sometimes it's difficult to show that u care, but I assure u that ppl do. Hang in there. But good poem. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I totally understand and have nothing but luv for ya man. Yah, somebody cares, but the most important person is you. I posted a poem like a week ago called "sick of it." Look it up, you might like it. And if its of any consolation, I care. jason ![]() |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, I'm down with your feelings in this poem. Sometimes I feel like the world sucks and everyone is just bull****ing me. But it always gets better! Peace dude. *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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ashley cain Junior Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 30Texas |
I can totally understand that feeling. The feeling that people just stare at you like your in some glass case, and then walk off because they could care less about you. Great job on expressing your feelings. Even though (God forgive me for sounding so trite)there is someone out there who cares, you can always write out your feelings until you can ask for help. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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