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Kyle aka Huck
Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 06:42 PM


Nobody cares,
Nobody even dares.
Nobody sees me,
They see what they want to see.
Nobody cares,
Here comes more nightmares.
Nobody looks inside to see,
A poor boy in need like me.
Nobody seems to care,
Then why do I dare?
To make do with what I've got.
Sit here in the sun so hot,
Burn does my soul.
Take me outta this God for saken hole!!
DOESN'T ANYONE CARE??


© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
wwjd168
New Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 3

1 posted 2000-07-18 04:00 PM


What is Love?
1 Corinthians 13

Jesus is love, and He cares!
John 3:16

God Bless you!  

-peter

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-18 04:20 PM


I know the feeling
but remember there are people out there who do care.... and just when you think that there is no way up, someone always tosses a rope!!

if you ever need to talk, send an emial my way...

take care of yourself, and great writing.


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Snickers
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT
3 posted 2000-07-18 04:53 PM


Nice work.  Even when it seems like nobody cares, there iz ALWAYS someone who does.  Sometimes it's difficult to show that u care, but I assure u that ppl do.  Hang in there.  But good poem.

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**


~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
4 posted 2000-07-19 09:52 AM


I totally understand and have nothing but luv for ya man.  Yah, somebody cares, but the most important person is you.  I posted a poem like a week ago called "sick of it."  Look it up, you might like it.  And if its of any consolation, I care.

jason

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-07-19 11:05 AM


Hey, I'm down with your feelings in this poem. Sometimes I feel like the world sucks and everyone is just bull****ing me. But it always gets better! Peace dude.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

ashley cain
Junior Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 30
Texas
6 posted 2000-07-19 12:00 PM


I can totally understand that feeling.  The feeling that people just stare at you like your in some glass case, and then walk off because they could care less about you.  Great job on expressing your feelings.  Even though (God forgive me for sounding so trite)there is someone out there who cares, you can always write out your feelings until you can ask for help.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-12-02 01:00 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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