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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Your big blue eyes are full of fun. Your tossed-up hair just turns me on. You brighten my day just like the sun- You're for me - you're the only one. But your big blue eyes look into hers, She runs her fingers through your tossed-up hair. My love for you is like a curse. A life without you I cannot bare. |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
This poem kinda ties in with my poem "To my forbidden love - Stephen" Please let me know what you think and please give your advice. Thanks. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
It really sucks when this happens. Sorry it had to happen to you. As for a title how about....I love you but you suck because.... I don't know about that but this is a really tough one to name, I can see your trouble. Good luck. jason  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just wondering if he even has any idea at all about all this. Maybe you have to tell him how you feel. Keep up the writing. Love to read your other poems  |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
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