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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
You told me how you felt before - I pushed your love aside. You never tell me anymore, Your feelings for me hide. I've just begun to realise That you are the only one. My heart sinks when I look into your eyes - With this much pain - how can love be fun? The way you laugh with your smilig eyes, Your sexy body and tossed up hair, You are the only reason I stay alive. How can love be so unfair? It's too late now to tell you That I've loved you from the word "go", But because you are back with her again, too, You will never, ever, know.... |
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ValerieB726 Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 14Louisville,OH, USA |
That was excellent! I can relate and feel the same way. I wish you well in all you do. Keep writing! |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear aangelle, love in the teenage years can be a difficult and confusing thing to deal with, but i assure you that love has a way of working itself out for the best... yes, there are time where it will hurt to love and even times when it may seem that no one cares, but such foolish pessimism is never truly the case... so keep your head up and your heart open and perhaps you'll stumble across the one that will make it all worthwhile... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i enjoyed this alot and know how it feels to be heart broken but for me i lost that one love forever because she was killed. but you my friend can still find it. because i have again but i'll always Love R.I.P (Melissa) JJ --- I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Thank you all so much for your kind responses, as this was the first poem I have submitted I was afraid you novices would laugh at it, maybe a few of you did but I'm now more confident about sending in more poems. Unfortunately though, I can only write poetry when I either feel extremely strong about something.If I get more replies I will tell you why I feel that way about this lad in my poem ( if anyone wants to know that is!!!) Thanks again!!! |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
AANGELLE -- I once felt similar to a guy I used to date . .. not a good feeling to have. Hope all works out. Love, Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
AANGELLE, i know the feelings that you are experiencing right now. i think everyone in here does. you'll pull through, but i say, if you want hime go get him. don't let anyone convince you that you don't deserve something you want. as for posting here, please feel free. we're all rather positive and excepting. welcome to Passions. and that's also the way i write. i can only write what i feel. but that is the best way. staight and unfiltered, right from the heart. i liked it. keep it up.< !signature--> Hey, everyone's got their demons right? We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi AANGELLE, This is wonderful, so much enjoyed. Cerenity |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
if we were to donate a dime to a charity for everytime someone said i know how you feel the charity would be rich...cause i know what your going through...i really liked the poem too... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Once again Thanks so much to you all, now I feel welcome and free to submit my poems here. It's not that I can't tell this lad how I feel It's that I don't want to in a way because telling him would mess his life again. The last time we were seeing each other for a short time and he left his girlfiend(2 yrs) for me, then he told me he loved me but I wasn't sure of my feelings then and ended our relatoship leaving him alone and hurt. We were still good friends as we worked together and in time I too realised that I was in love - with him. Unfortunately I left it too late thinking he would always wait for me(stupid) and he got back with his girlfriend. I caused him a lot of trouble the last time and he does not deserve it again incase I (for some strange reason ) change my mind. So I wrote this poem to lrt it out. Thanks for listening!!! |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
;p |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Love is a very difficult thing to understand, but you just have to follow your heart. This way, you'll have no regrets. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
My dear friend~don't regret the things you do! For some reason inside your heart you do them for a reason! I know it is hard to believe but your heart will heal, because time heals even the deepest wounds. I know that it is very hard right now, I've been in the same situation, just know that no matter what, things do get better eventually. Keep your head up and know that all of us are here for you!! Best of Luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Thank you all so much for your advice and thoughts, I really appreciate it a lot. I now agree that things happen for a reason and I'm on the road to looking for love again.!!! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I loved it. Hope to read more. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Great poem! I really liked it. I think that we all know how hard love can be at times. You just have to keep your head up and smile and you always get through the rough times. Keep on writing. I enjoyed the poem. BabyGirl1 |
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~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Aangelle: I really liked your poem. It really expresses how you feel. I hope things work out for you! Good luck! Luv, ~Night_Mist~ |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Thanks so much I never ever dreamed my poem would get this many replies! I'll be reading all your poems in the future... |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Love is the only thing that makes life worth living. The lack or loss of it is what hurts so badly. Only time and experience can teach you how to hold on to it and help you deal when it's not there. Post some more would ya?! Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions AAngelle! Wonderful first post ... straight from the heart and filled with emotions. Hope to read more from you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
i can see how you wouldn't want to tell this guy how you feel b/c it might mess things up for him, but you don't know that for sure. i mean there's this guy that i like right now and have for over 2 years and have never officially told him. he went out with two of my best friends and i went out with other guys but he was always on my mind and now i'm really regretting never having told him sooner. basically you never know until you try. sorry to write such a long response, but i really liked the poem. keep up the good work. A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever. ~Jessamyn West |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Thanks Kit, Jenleslie and Jeremy. I really loved getting all these replies. Thanks ever so much!!! |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
this is a well express poem and it's messed up that sometimes things go like that....we realize things just when they're too late...i know it might hurt but things are always for the best..(that kinda rhymes..lol) best wishes love butter |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
I'm Back!!! This was the first ever poem I submitted so I'm "re-Submitting" it as a kind of way to re-introduce myself as I have being doing everything but writing these days! Hope 2 get 2 know u all soon! |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
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