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Teen Poetry #3

Cage of Rage

Kyle aka Huck
Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 11:57 AM

Trapped in a cage,
I need some place to rage.
Visions of freedom and peace,
When will this ever cease?
Thoughts of a new day,
They keep saying the same things making me lay,
On this bed of nails.
My heart screams,
Hopeless it seems.
GIVE ME SOME PLACE TO RAGE!
GET ME OUT OF THIS CAGE!
LET ME BE FREE!
Why can't you see??
All I need is to be free.
So before I explode,
Give me some place to rage,
TAKE ME OUT OF THIS DAMN CAGE!!

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

1 posted 2000-07-17 01:10 PM

Very strong and the emotion is very strong, making this poem really powerful. It's a great poem, keep up the great work.
Kittie

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-17 01:41 PM

Hey there, very strong poem. I liked it. I know the feeling. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-01 11:21 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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