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Love? |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
When one finds love They wish and hope for it to be never ending They speak of the future and their wishes But only think of the present I once found love, and cherished it dearly Trying my absolute best to be emotionally perfect Though, I could not offer the physical attributes needed to gain the love of another I felt love for another, who felt nothing even near the same level, a shall pwerson I realize if one was so shallow How could I feel love for this person? This is not known by me, only questioned At one moment speaking notions of eternal love for eachother The next, ending it all for no apparent reason I may be told that what I felt wasn't love Who has the right to tell another person what they feel? Love is very well a stronger thing than any other If an emotion is strong enough to alter the physical How could it be anything less than love? Love, a thing as strong as life itself Can bring the only thing as strong as that life, Death Thoughts of taking my life run through my mind every moment I feel no need to keep myself, I would feel no pleasure, ever Lately, nothing but pain Emotional pain, stronger than any I have ever felt before This tremendously strong pain must have come from something equally as powerful Possibly love? You tell me. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, Welcome to Passions. Great first post. I enjoyed reading it. It had a lot of feeling and emotion. I hope to read more by you. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey this was a really nice poem with a lot of fellings inside!! Glad to hear a poem from ya!! Keep it up..!! Love ya, Cutie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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