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Lying on my Bed...
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Lying on my Bed... |
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BABYFACE Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 17DALLAS,TX |
LYING IN MY BED NEVER SLEEPING, ALLWAYZ THINKING WONDERING WHY, WHY DO I FEEL THIS WAY? WHEN ALL YOU DO IS LIE IN A HYPNOTIC RAGE I FEEL TRAPPED IN THIS LIFELESSS AGE BY THE PHONE, AWAITING IT'S RING IT NEVER DOES, AND I WONDER, WHAT WILL THE FUTUER BRING? HAVE I BEEN FORGOTTEN? OVERSHAPED BY YOUR NEW LOVE YOU TREW OUT MY FEELINGS FOR YOU WITH A KICK AND A SHOVE LOOK WHAT YOU DID TO ME. IT IS THE TRUE ME THAT I LACK IF YOU ARE DONE SLAYING MY SOUL PLEASE, I BEG YOU, GIVE IT BACK. IF I HAD ONE WISH I KNOW WHAT I WOULD DO TO FORGET THE MEMORIES OF US, JUST LIKE YOU DID A SINGLE TEAR ROLLS DOWN MY CHEEK IF YOU ONLY CARED TO SEE BUT, IT IS NOT FOR THE LOSS OF YOU BUT, IT IS FOR THE LOSS OF ME. IF YOU ONLY KNEW IF YOU ONLY CARED I AM HERT, NOW WHY AREN'T YOU IS IT BECAUSE YOUR A MAN AND IT DOSEN'T BOTHER YOU, OR IS IT BECAUSE YOU STILL HAVE FEELINGS FOR ME, BUT YOU ARE TO MANLY TO SHOW HOW YOU TRUFULLY FEEL. DEDICATED TO MY EX BOYFRIEND DSR |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This poem has a great rythem to it, and you can also feel your emotions. weel done A SINGLE TEAR ROLLS DOWN MY CHEEK IF YOU ONLY CARED TO SEE BUT, IT IS NOT FOR THE LOSS OF YOU BUT, IT IS FOR THE LOSS OF ME. that part was my favorite. Only thing I didn't like was the little digs on men but hey my heart goes out to you anyway IsGona |
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Rayz Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13Fresno, CA, U.S.A |
Babyface, First off that is a great poem. And I'm really sorry for the way he treated you. Some guys and really be jerks. I really wish that some guys would see what they do to girls and for the sake of their "game" I truly am sorry. E-mail me if you ever want to talk, I'm a great listener. Rayzig@aol.com Ray |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful...the pain from guys seems to hurt more than anything else...this brings back alot of memories form this guy I was completly in love with...it still hurts to think about it but theres not much else to do about it...as I siad before, beautiful poetry.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hey...this is a good poem...I like the meaning behind it. I know how you feel, been there plenty of times. Keep your head up you'll find someone who loves you for just you...good luck and I look forward to reading more of your poems. love ya, Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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