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Kyle aka Huck
Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 05:37 PM


Told her how i feel,
Made her mad and her hed reel.
Just a friend of mine,
How did everything go bad from fine?
Asked to leave her alone,
Why do i have a head of solid bone?
I didnt use my head,
Stay she didn't,
Left instead.
I just lost my best friend,
Now i want to die.



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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-07-17 01:17 AM


Hey homie...trust me, in 6 months so much will have happened to you that this will just be a deeply bound scar, not a bleeding wound..  Actually, chances are, bad things will happen in her life and she'll come around and realize that she needs you friendship...trust me.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-17 08:57 AM


Hey there, just keep your head up.  I am sorry to hear that.  Your poem was well written, though.  If it was meant to be she will be back.  Email me if you ever need someone to talk to.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 11:19 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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