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Teen Poetry #3

Lonliness

Kyle aka Huck
Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 10:15 AM

So alone,
No other place I call home.
I have no friends,
Dad says ' reach out to both ends '
Dad doesn't understand,
That if he'd take me by the hand,
I'd realize,
Maybe life will give me a surprise.
Mom ignores me,
Thinks she bores me.
Everyone here despises,
Ok, take off the disguises.
Try to fit in,
Tell me to go live in a garbage tin.
Wonder the streets at night,
Trying to make things right.
Can't they see?
Does anyone hear me?
All i need is one friend,
Friend till the very end.
Show me the way,
With my heart i shall repay.
But even still,
I stand here all alone,
Confused,
And still....
So alone

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-16 11:29 AM

Hey there, I enjoyed this poem, I just hope this isn't how you really feel. Keep up the good work. Keep your head up. If you need to talk to someone email me.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:32 PM

Great poem, i think lots of people can relate...but i hope you don't really feel that way. Keep up the writing and keep your chin up
Bel

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-01 11:17 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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