My mind wanders....it wonders

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Teen Poetry #3

My mind wanders....it wonders

sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

0 posted 2000-07-16 03:54 AM

my mind wandering
the thought of him invades
the calmness i've instilled
upon the havoc of such emotions
that tend to be the cause of
such unforgetable salty tears
butterflies once kept under lock
break free from their prison
their dance a mad flutter
in the warmth of my stomach
without a word he seems to construct
a fire smoldering deep within me
i now begin to wonder
has fate found a way
to piece together
the crystal fragments
of my broken heart

"god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways"

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-16 08:07 AM

"butterflies once kept under lock
break free from their prison
their dance a mad flutter
in the warmth of my stomach"

Your imagery in this lovely poem is wonderful SorrowfulAngel! I could just "feel" the butterflies"

Beautifully written ... keep up the great work!!!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-07-17 01:14 AM

It's odd...in one hand, it's a scary thought that someone can have that kind of power towards you....in the other hand, it's exciting and full of hope. I'll love how you people evoke these thoughts in me with your words.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

3 posted 2000-07-17 08:09 AM

try not to let your mind wander to far, my Queen, you might cut off a finger at work.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-01 11:18 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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