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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-15 02:36 AM

Come

Come and send me throught the fear.
Come and capture me.
Come and capture every comfort
that isolation brings.
Come to tell love is blind
Come to try my love.
Come to hear me whisper all
that ours could be made of.
Come from a story, a dusty book.
Come from real life.
Come from the vallies and shadows of doubt
where loss is but devine.
Come with tales that tell the pain.
Come and smile at me.
Just come and show another face
that may set me free.

Jeremy D. Halstead 2/00

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"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

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anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2000-06-15 02:58 AM

hey Jeremy i really loved the poem. You express yourself in a very passionate way.
-anomaly187

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-06-15 09:32 AM

Don't we all wish for these things...well...not everyone but everyone wants something from someone else in this way...you've described it very well.

D.E.

Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

"So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler

*+Daughter of Darkness+*

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

3 posted 2000-06-15 03:49 PM

Hey Jeremy! One question - has any of your work been published? Because if it hasn't or if it never is, I would be very surprised. You truly have a talent with words and expression that I think we all can admire. Don't ever stop writing okay?
PS - thanx for your kind replies to my poems! I really appreciate feedback as it gives me an incentive and motivation to keep writing. I've got another one in the works now that should be posted soon. Feel free to pick at it

Hee hee!

Much love~
Kandi/Kris

~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

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