Teen Poetry #3 |
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Another Day Gone |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Now isn't soon enough Later really means never Clinging to what's in your head is useless to endevour. Your efforts went unnoticed Now you question what they were for. Just when the chance shows itself you don't want it anymore. The opportunities of the day, they pass me by without a fight I'll just sit and wait for someone else to make it right. Because it's easier to believe that when I lie down tonight a light in the dark will come and make sense of my life. I pray to God that when I wake it will all be clear because another day is gone and I've still gone nowhere. Another day gone, and it won't turn around to come back and pick you up from where it left you on the ground. The opportunity snuck up, and it caught you lying down. It slapped you in the face, and you never made a sound. Don't let the opportunities pass you by without a fight You can't just sit and wait. No one else can live your life. The hands of fate can't be trusted Chances don't just appear Another day is gone. Why are you still sitting here? [This message has been edited by Kandi (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
![]() ![]() ![]() p.s.-go to the members link at the top of the page to do your profile. ![]() "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey there Kandi. I like how the feeling turned from ponderous to negative in the switch of a stanza. Again, the idea of the poem was smart. Keep it up. Jeremy D. Halstead< !signature--> "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey Kandi, This is all so true and you've written it very well. ![]() D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is so true..... lovely poem ![]() |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Ahhh indeed, I really enjoyed this poem! It definitely struck a chord with me, as I have seen so many people apathetically watch their opportunities slip by - (this clashes with my carpe diem attitude) lol. Great work! Vreni |
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