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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
All that I think about, all that I feel. All that I dream about, all that I fear. All that my lives about, drawing you near. All that I care about all that I want to be, and all that I am. You are all my all's about. your all I fear. Your all I think about your all I feel. Your all I dream about, I'm drawing you near. All that my pains about, Your always here. Jason A. Carmen |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This poem's about me isn't!?...how sweet...I'm touched....hehehe...I'm not sure if I've read this one or not....I did enjoy it though. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
All I can say is...WOW! Excellent poem  keep it upWaves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Amazing!! She's one lucky girl, I hope she realizes how much you care Now if I could only find a guy who would write poetry like that for me!! Nonetheless a spectacular peice!!! |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
I hope this stream of writng isn't about a certain someone in Chicago. Very well written. Certainly one of your best. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well this poem amazed me...i give you props for it...keep up the good work...you are a very talented person... by the way your from chicago?????? ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, once again you have me sitting here breathless with the beautiful words of this poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
though i have been gone i happy to come back and read something so great and sweet. i hope whoever this is about reads it and all your dreams come true. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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