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Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

0 posted 2000-07-15 01:57 AM

I stare at the clock angrily
as th cold dark of lost love
sweeps about me
Like fog over the prairy.
cold winds howl like the scream
coming from deep within my soul.
I reach out only to find injury.
I cry out but hear only
the echo of dispair.
My heart knumbs of th epain once felt.
The fire is extinguished,
gone forever, but I still search.
And nothing do I find.

Jason Allen Carmen

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2000-07-15 04:03 AM

I still can't put my finger on it, but there's just something about your writing that is just different than anybody elses I've ever read. I love yer style. Even when your poems have the same theme, they don't seem the same.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-15 08:24 AM

I like the way this flows Jason! Very nicely written! It appears you are on the same quest as many of us here, searching for the answers that elude us so ... good hunting!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-15 10:53 AM

There is something about your poetry that just leaves me breathless....
I am left in awe

This one was wonderful!!

I can make the fire come back

, no seriously though, excellent writing!! You have a great talent

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

4 posted 2000-07-15 10:58 AM

Jason, forlorn, melancholy and searching. Love will find it's way back to you. Never give up hope.

Thomas A. Plemmons

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2000-07-15 11:45 PM

Very deep and powerful...continue working through the pain and seeking the things you wish in life...great poetry here!

*Krista Knutson*

"This above all: to thine own self be true,
And it must follow, as the night the day,
Thou canst not then be false to any man."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 11:14 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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