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Regret (Strange how the person that can break your heart the most is u) |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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wish she knew how much I loved her how much I cared wish she could have seen past the mirrors the smoke I blew at her why couldn't I show my love how come I hid it from her why was I so afraid what did I have to fear she use count on me but now to her I don't even count maybe I feared getting hurt ironicly, the regret hurts more than any person could ever hurt me I guess you live and learn but I feel I may have missed my chance to live |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I really like your poetry. All I can say about this one is to remember your mistakes and learn from them. And when love finds you again, don't let go. jason |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
~Jacman~ Thanks alot I will look for some of your posts in the future. Thanks again, Jason |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I loved your poem. I hope to read more from you. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I have to agree with Jason on this one, don't ever regret, feel remorseful but don't regret, learn from your mistakes and teach yourself how to love because you didn't know how to before. Keep it up my dear friend, I enjoy your poetry. Best of luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you shouldnt reget it...it was a learning experience...at least thats how i see it...well i really enjoy your work...so keep posting... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
So happens the first poem I decided to read today was yours after I had a huge fall out with my ex boyfriend (again)..hrmm..funny how life works, but enough about that, your poem really hits home, sounds kinda like a converstation I've had with him many times... Kristen "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Rayz Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13Fresno, CA, U.S.A |
Isgona, That is a awsome poem. It really made me think about a situation that I'm going through right now. Maybe i should take your advice, I do like her, But should I ask her out, I mean, what would happen to our friendship? I see why you played it safe. Maybe i will do something. Thanks Ray |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
amazing poem I used to think there was nothing worse than regretting something you did, I have since then learned from past experience that it is far worse to regret not doing something at all.... do let a fear of intimacy stand in your way, we've all been there and once you experience great love that fear will disappear forever, you just have to let yourself open up a little!! I really enjoy your work, keep it up |
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Rachel Turner Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16Judsonia, Arkansas |
I think your poem was meant for me to read tonight b/c i really like this guy and we are really good friends and i want to ask him out but i was scared of rejection but b/c of your poem i think i'm going to ask him anyways!! Keep up the good work!!! *RaChEl* no guts, no glory!!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank u all for your replies!! This poem has meant alot to me mostly cause the experience was so inportant in my life. I have learned a hard lesson and in one way that's good but in another way I wish I could have learned in a different way. So I hope every one in that reads this poem can learn from my mistake. This regret really does hurt more than any thing I have felt. thank u again for your replies IsGona |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Waaaaaaay late, I know. But better late then never. I liked this it shows a lot of emotion, and it is important to know that regret stings, but shouldn't be felt for very long, because all situations serve a purpose. You needed to learn from this to live better. Anyway, keep it up. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I'm sorry I didn't catch this poem on it's first time around! It was wonderful! I loved the phrasing. I hope things get better from here for you, and luck swings your way  Best wishes...*Jennifer |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thanks you 2 Jenn ~ I did learn from this. It was a very important lesson. thx Jennifer ~ Thanks for the support. Luck really has swung my way. thx Anyhow I've revised this one since I posted it too. basically just changed the end a little. here it is: ~*~My Chance to Love~*~ wish she knew how much I loved her how much I cared wish she could have seen past the mirrors the smoke I blew at her why couldn't I show my love? how come I hid it from her? why was I so afraid? what did I have to fear? she use to count on me but now to her I don't even count maybe I feared getting hurt ironically, the regret hurts more than any person could ever hurt me I guess you live and learn but I feel I missed my chance to love and how does one live with out love [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the little change you did. Nice one IsGona.....hope to see more of you..post dude......post!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Hey, i love your poem. so many times us young people do a lot of things we regret. most of the time it has to do with love. I think you portrayed it right on the money with this point of view. i enjoy all of your poems *do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :) |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
WOW.. this is breathtaking... one of the best poems i have read in a while... keep it up!! ~*Justine*~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
To me, it's okay to regret things. Just don't let the regret take over your entire life. You'll find another woman someday. Someone who loves you as much as you love her and will cherish you no matter what... I just hope for your sake that you find her soon. Awesome heartfelt poem. The second one's good too... ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is a great poem! katherine |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem, I am glad you have learnt from your experiences... and the bits you fixed up made the poem even better, great work!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
DD ~ Thanks man. I will post again... soon I think. Sugarpie ~ Yes we do regret to often. Thanks for the poem. Pixie ~ 'Breath taking'??? wow... thanks SkyFire ~ your right. I have a hard time with regret though. especially regretting not trying. regretting what I did is not so bad. regretting what I didn't do is much worse. But it's nothing but a learning experience now. Thanks for the reply Katherine ~ Thank you Melz ~ I did learn from this. thx "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
So true.......Good job. Looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ah, another work of brilliance strong ideas here im glad you learned from such a lesson dont let it happen again, ya hear? keep'em coming! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is so true. Regret is a horrible thing to have! People conceal their feelings too often... It's a shame too because each day may be the last one you have to show people that you care... Better luck next time. Nice work, too |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey i love your poetry, theres so much behind your words...very noble lol i dont know what the word im looking for is, im a lil out of it. sorry!but neways..good peom¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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