Teen Poetry #3 |
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best friend |
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nikki813 Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 15PA, USA |
How does it feel? To lose it all and yet gain some? To lose what you think is real, and yet realize the reality? The rollercoaster that is your world slowly plains out and the ride is smooth. You felt alone, but you never were. He's there, he cares, and in a better way than you thought. This love is forever, and it won't fall apart. I know that now and I'm finally happy. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem...but what i dont understand is why you would call this best friend??? ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a nice poem, it's simple, but gets the message through. It is a wonderful feeling, to know that He is always there, and I am glad that He is also you best friend ![]() Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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