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nikki813
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since 2000-04-29
Posts 15
PA, USA

0 posted 2000-07-14 03:21 PM


How does it feel?
To lose it all and yet gain some?
To lose what you think is real, and yet realize the reality?

The rollercoaster that is your world slowly plains out and the ride is smooth.

You felt alone, but you never were.
He's there, he cares, and in a better way than you thought.

This love is forever, and it won't fall apart.

I know that now and I'm finally happy.


© Copyright 2000 Nicole Maiorino - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-14 05:14 PM


this is a good poem...but what i dont understand is why you would call this best friend???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

TearsOfPearls
Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
2 posted 2000-07-14 05:16 PM


This is a nice poem, it's simple, but gets the message through.

It is a wonderful feeling, to know that He is always there, and I am glad that He is also you best friend  

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 11:09 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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