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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Why couldnt you at least say good~bye? Now all I do is sit here and cry. Why didnt you tell me, just let me know? What did I do to make you go? Why did you play with my feelings and shatter my heart? Cause all this pain is tearing me apart. Why did you say those things you said? Were you only trying to get me in bed? Why did you tell me all those lies? After you promised you'd stay by my side? ***Well this was dedicated to one certain person that was in my life...the only thing that isnt true is the part about getting me in bed...i never did anything but fall in love with this guy...only to get my heart broken... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Okay. This lets all of us guys know just how much of an @$$ we can be. Sorry this guy did this to you. Hope someone else makes up for it. Very well written. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WELL THOMAS THANK YOU FOR REPLYING...YEAH HE IS AN A@@ BUT I DO ALSO HAVE SOMEONE ELSE IN MY LIFE...HE HAS MADE ME THE HAPPIEST I HAVE EVER BEEN...AND THERE ARE GUYS OUT THERE THAT DONT REALLY CARE THERE JUST OUT THEIR TO GET THEIRS IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Very beautiful poem. Unfortunatly, breakups, are as much a part of life as is falling in love. It may hurt a lot today, but the pain will fade. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Well, here's an interesting but true way to look at this kind of thing: Every talks about wanting to be in love and how much it hurts when the love has left...well, only one love can forever...the rest, obvioulsy can't. I'm glad that you're being treated well write now. Maybe one of these days, I'll snag somebody to do that for me, too...oh, I'm just pathetic right now....never mind me. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jose~~the pain has gone away...i have moved on with my life and found someone new that i love more then anything...thanks for replying... jeremy~~thanks for replying to my poem...and dont be saying that stuff about yourself...you are not pathetic...you are a very talented person...and you are my friend... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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