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Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

0 posted 2000-07-13 02:27 AM

You were born from a tragedy
As I was born from many.

As much as you hate,
As much as we hate
The tragedies from which we sprang…

There is no denying that they took place,
We are proof of those happenings.
Although those events were quite lamentable,
Thank god they happened,

Because…
You were born
I was born,
And we are together.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-13 06:25 AM

Thought-provoking poem Jose! All children born to this world are a blessing to behold, no matter the circumstance ... lovely sentiments.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-13 11:08 AM

Hey there, I liked the poem very much. Keep up the good work. I thought that it was well written and your thoughts came together nicely. Keep up the good work.

Luv always,
Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

3 posted 2000-07-13 11:09 AM

This is a very insightful piece. It is quite amazing how our trageties bless us in ways that we never thought possible.

jason

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

4 posted 2000-07-13 03:17 PM

Very nice poem I think you did a great job and i hope to read more.

Lovely_Kris

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

5 posted 2000-07-14 01:36 AM

Tanks guys! I'm glad you liked my poem. I would say that it come with being born in the thirds world, but I've already confessed that I really wasn't.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-07-14 01:41 AM

well jose i am becoming quite a fan of yours...you write very well...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

7 posted 2000-07-14 12:01 PM

Thank Erin. I'm glad you like my work. Did you get my email?

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-12-01 11:08 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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