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Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103


0 posted 2000-07-13 05:50 PM


Please, someone explain
why my tears must fall,
and why you had to leave me
standing all alone.
If destiny had chosen
and not the plan of life,
would you have stayed at my side
and listened to me
as if I were the only person worth listening to?
Why did you have to be so perfect
in every single way;
maybe if you weren't so sweet,
good-bye would be easy to say.
But it's not,
and I simply can't let you go,
please come back and love me
don't let it be true-
that you had to leave me all alone
without that extra hand
to help me through each day.
I need you now,
tonight and everyday,
I wish you'd come back and knock on my door,
hold me just like always
and make life simple again.




© Copyright 2000 Kittie - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-07-13 05:55 PM


just like the saying goes
everything happens for a reason

like the reason for me leaving this forum...

nice read though very sad....sometimes to let go is the best thing to do...even if its so painful just do it..

Sincerely
a_l

Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

2 posted 2000-07-13 06:00 PM


I think this a great poem. Thank you for sharing this poem and i know it can be very hard to let go but it also take time to get over it.

Lovely_Kris

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-13 06:04 PM


well i have not read much of your work yet but this is a good poem...it sucks when the person you love lets go of love...dont you agree??? well you already have...just like Kris said...it will take a lot of time to get over...the same with tears...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
4 posted 2000-07-14 06:35 AM


Just think, 95% chances are, you'll be saying this exact same thing to someone else in the next 6 months or so....sorry, I'm rather deppressed at the moment...it really was a good poem though.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
5 posted 2000-07-14 09:43 AM


Very sad poem.  I hope that this isn't about a real person.  Well good luck if you are looking.  Keep up the good work.

Your sis,
Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Phoebee
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ
6 posted 2000-07-14 01:01 PM


What a sad poem.  I know how you feel.  People come and people go, but only your true friends stick around when times are tough.  Hang in there.  Great poem!

"Everything happens for a reason!"

Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

7 posted 2000-07-14 05:40 PM


PEOPLE, YOU ARE NOT GETTING WHAT THIS MEANS... IT ISN'T ABOUT A PERSON, IT IS ABOUT... AS WEIRD AS THIS SOUNDS, THIS IS ABOUT MY CAT THAT DIED OF LUEKEMIA A FEW YEARS AGO, NOT A LOST LOVE!
Kittie

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

8 posted 2000-07-14 07:38 PM


My heart goes out to you kitty.  I understand your sorrow.  things will get better but it will take time.  thanks for sharing a part of your heat and this poem
best regards
IsGona

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
9 posted 2000-07-15 01:17 AM


Kittie, I'm sorry you lost something you cared about so much.  Please, be carefull though.  don't you remember what happend in pet semetary?j/k.  No seriously, I don't know what I would do if I lost my dog.  she is the best friend that I have.

jason

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-12-01 11:10 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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