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Identity Crisis |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Who am I? I never seem to know, Then you call me names and then tell me you love me. The kindest words leave your lips, After the most abrasive actions. Sometimes, I just cry. Who are you? And why do I care? You misuse love, You mistreat me. Retract yourself, Because I no longer want you. The pain you've provided stings me. The hurt you've brought has scarred me. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This poem shows a lot of emotion. I'm so sorry that you feel this way though. Let him go, he ain't worth the trouble. I know it's easy to say and hard to do. Keep writing and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I couldn't agree with you more. When a person is mistreating you in any kind of relationship, it is time to remove that person from your life. Good luck!! jason  |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I liked your poem. I think a person should never mistreat another person. I have a say I agree with acire & jacman. I hope to read more of your poems. [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i feel your pain...my ex to this day still bad talks me...i dont know if he physically or emotionally hurt you but its not worth it...if a guy cant treat you with respect he aint worth your time... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Powerful expressions and message here Jenn. I'm glad you realize that you need to remove yourself from this unhappy situation. No one should be treated or made to feel this way. Hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, he's so strange. I kind of figured out somewhere along the line that he was hurting me. Teasing, pressuring, just overall messing w/ me. Some characteristics were stereotypical NBC movie specials you know? But then when we were in the midst of a stretched out break-up, he was hurt I could possibly feel used, and that I took the teasing so seriously. I just know that the bad outweighed the good, and having been used or not... I need to be out. I refuse to believe that people are inately bad, I just know there are certain ones I can't be with. Thanks for listening. And for the comments. Jenn |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This poem shows so much strength. Many times when people get themselves into relationships that are not good for them, they stay even though it is hurting them more than leaving. You show so much strength for realizing that this relationship was not the one for you. Great poem and I cant wait to read more. "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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