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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
When I say 'I love you' I've only begun to share my feelings. What I feel and know is so much more. The love pumps through my veins From head to toe. My heart beats faster and faster, With every thought of you. Is my life a disaster? I can't remember. Nothing else matters- You're in my life, In my heart, On my mind. Every night And every day. I will never feel as right As I do when I'm with you- Much to my mother's dismay. I'm yours- Today, Tomorrow, Forever! Dedicated to: Dale Joshua Rubenstein "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think this a wounderful poem. I also liked the way you expressed your feelings. I hope all goes well. Also I hope to read more of your poems. Lovely_Kris |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You go girl!! Once love is found, we should never let it go. I hope that it only grows stronger. jason  |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Thank you. You both are great. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey, my car's name is Phoebe!!! Anywho...I love it when people are in love. It's the greatest high in the world. I pray for you no pain. I also pray that I can have that again someday...well, I know I will...but someday before I end up in an asylum. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. I know the feeling. Well keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i know how your feeling...and at this point whoever that guy is should be feeling very special...by the way who is he??? ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Thank you- all of you! Erin: Dale is my boyfriend, who just happens to be in the Marines. He is in Florida and I live in Arizona. We've been dating on and off for about 3 years. Thanks again! "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
that's a very sweet poem doll...good luck to you "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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