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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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* Ok guys, this is another of my songs, so the repetitive parts are just the chorus line. A'ight? Peace!* Last night I heard you crying I was standing at your door All those flowers I've been buying And you still say you want more I'm getting down I'm getting low I'm getting scared You're saying no Don't stop now Believe me When I say I need you, baby Don't hurt me I'm fragile Tell me, are you gonna save me From yourself? You say I've been unfaithful Well I know that I've been true My emotions feel unstable When I'm feeling them for you I'm getting down I'm getting low I'm getting scared Where did you go? Don't stop now Believe me When I say I need you, baby Don't hurt me I'm fragile Tell me, are you gonna save me From yourself? I need to breathe again I need my head above the water I need this hell to end Because if it gets much hotter I'll stay down I'll stay low I'll stay scared I told you so Don't stop now Believe me When I say I need you, baby Don't hurt me I'm fragile Tell me, are you gonna save me From yourself? Last night I heard you crying I was standing at your door All our memories went flying To your suitcase on the floor I'm getting down I'm getting low I'm getting scared Where did you go? It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I liked it. Keep up the good work. Chel By the way do you really sing these songs? "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
it sounds like an excellent song....i would like to hear it someday... "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great flow and rhyming schemes LyricFetish! Hope to hear it on the radio some day! Great work!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey guys, thank you for the compliments! Yes I do actually sing these songs, I'm in a band w/ some friends of mine. We play local gigs and other such things. I've got quite a collection of songs, and I sometimes post them here before performing them. Peace!! *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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