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This Feeling |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sometimes I am hot Sometimes I am cold It seems as though when your near I feel this way Sometimes I am happy Sometimes I am sad It happens so fast Sometimes I laugh Sometimes I cry A feeling when you are near These seem to happen all at once I can't express this feeling All I know is that this is the feeling I get when your around "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I know the feeling you are describing exactly, that feeling of not knowing how you feel, and of the wya you feel changing in just seconds you did a good job of expressing this!! excellent work |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Wow, great work Chel. Keep up the wonderful poems, hope to read more of your work. Things were expressed well, and the dominant emotion is strong. Kittie |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
it is the feeling of teenage love. it burns like the acid in chemistry class it holds you in a grip like the vice in shop class it confuses like a substitute algebra teacher it won't go away like the smell in a gym locker. and worst of all, it's moodier than any PMS sufferer and changes its mind faster than cafeteria food can get through your system. it's good and bad. it's teenage love. --------------- seriously, good work. i hear ya, and it is a horrible feeling...until it is a good feeling...then it goes back...well, you know how it goes. keep up the good work. and i got a question about your signature. do you like Oscar Wilde or are you a "can't hardly wait" fan? just curious =) < !signature--> "The bar is always open and the time is always right. If god's word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." -Bradley Nowell [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey kid...nice work. Is this an old one or something that's happening now. I pray for the latter of the two. Anyways, nice work....oh..and, thnx fer the email. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Great work. I think this is a realy good poem. I Liked the way you expressed the way you feel. Hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Vey nice poem. I love your work. I'm sure the person who this is meant for feels very special. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Chel, Short, but sweet. As alwayz a pleasure to read another of your poems. Keep 'em comin'. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Rayz Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13Fresno, CA, U.S.A |
This is a awsome poem and it really puts teenage feelings (i.e. mine) in a new light. I know the feelings that your talking about and your really expressed them well. Ray |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nice poem. you really captured the essance of not being sure of what your feeling but being more than sure that there is something happening when he's around. It's a tough one. Only your heart w/ the help of time will tell you what exactly you are feeling. thanks for this beutiful poem IsGona |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Seems to be some pretty strong emotions floating around here! But that's a good thing. I know how you feel, no one else can make you feel the way he does, no one makes you happier inside than him. Hope it all works out! Best of Luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I want to first start off by saying thanx to everyone who has read any of my other poems. I am glad that you all enjoyed this one. I have enjoyed being part of passions and hearing your responses positive or negative, mostly positive makes me realize that I do have friends. I want to especially thank my sister, Kittie, my friend, Lovely_Kris, and I don't think I would be here without Jose Marti, my boyfriend. Thank you everyone. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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