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April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 2000-07-14 01:14 AM

Walking.
   Thinking.
      Wishing.

Blue, clear waters
   Small, white crests
      Kissed by the setting sun.

Walking endlessly
   Can't get you out of my thoughts
      Wishing for your touch.

Wonderful young couple
   Sweet innocent touch
      Kisses when no one sees.

Still I walk on
   Thinking of times like that
      Wishing that could be us

Beautiful old couple
   Faithful loyal friends
      Kind love like newlyweds.

Walk by them and see their smiles
   Think of years to come
      Wish that we'll be that happy.

Finally I won't walk any more
   Thinking clearly after the tears
      No more wishing today.

Doubt thou the stars are fire;
Doubt that the sun doth move;
Doubt truth to be a liar;
But never doubt I love.
~*~Shakespeare~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-07-14 01:17 AM

wow...i am amazed with this one...it is beautiful...it makes me think of how my future is gonna be...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

2 posted 2000-07-14 01:57 AM

April,
Very moving poem. It stimulates a thousand thoughts in ones head, and gives Love in all of it's stages. Wondering if it will last, seeing those who are trying to make it last, and seeing those for whom it has lasted.
Good job.

Thomas A. Plemmons

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Phoebee
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 42
Peoria, AZ

3 posted 2000-07-14 02:06 PM

Wow, April. Your poem is very moving. I hope to read more.

"Everything happens for a reason!"

Rayz
Junior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 13
Fresno, CA, U.S.A

4 posted 2000-07-14 03:56 PM

Aprial, That was really a great poem, and to me it really made sence and made me think about this girl i know. Anyway, it was really put together well and you did a great job

Ray

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

5 posted 2000-07-15 04:18 AM

Hey...you should be proud!!! You just gave me an idea for my next masterpiece wannabe. Make sure ya read it.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

6 posted 2000-07-15 06:28 AM

This is a wonderful poem, full of emotion, but you know what, we spend all of our lives, going out of minds trying to figure out what will happen. We must learn to live asif each day is our last, but we still must dream about tomorrow.

Fantastic poem, keep it up

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-12-01 11:11 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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