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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
As the day goes by, I watch the clouds, and anticipate the touch of your warm skin. I imagine being amongst those clouds Feeling the wisk of air, Knowing that you love me, And that I love you. Hoping that I may never fall from these clouds Dedicated to a certain someone, she knows who she is. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Thanx, I really enjoyed reading the poem. I hope you never change. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
No Chel, thank you. You're so very sweet. I'm glad that you liked my poem. Even if nobody else did. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is the sweetest poem that i have read yet...it makes me think of me and my boyfriend...how i feel like i am also floating on a cloud...he makes me feel special when we are together...and i love it...good luck with this girl... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Thanks Erin. I hope that you are very happy with him. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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