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Phoebee
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 42
Peoria, AZ

0 posted 2000-07-13 04:59 PM

Your eyes filled with so much hurt-
Unbearable for me.
Only eyes filled with joy I wish to see.
As tears rolled down my cheeks
I welcomed your embrace.
In your chest
Is where I buried my face-
To hide my pain,
To escape the world
The world that holds too many good-byes.
You wiped my tears away,
And wrapped your arms around me.
"Next time,"
You whispered,
"I'm not letting go!"
The last time I'd be able
To touch you-
Feel your warmth,
For what seems like eternity.
Left with only memories
And tears in my eyes.
Come back for me,
Take me with you.
Can't you see?
I'm so blue
Here without you
To hold me.
One day, my love!
The day our 'hellos' come more often than our
'good-byes.'
The day we never let go.

Dedicated to: Dale Joshua Rubenstein
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"Everything happens for a reason!"

[This message has been edited by Phoebee (edited 07-14-2000).]

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

1 posted 2000-07-13 05:42 PM

This is a wonderful poem and the rhyme really works. The dominant emotion is very clear and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to read more of your work!
Kittie

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

2 posted 2000-07-14 12:26 PM

This was a nice poem. The emotions in this poem are so strong and moving that I can't wait to read your next post.

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

3 posted 2000-07-14 01:00 AM

I really loved this poem! Is it ok if I send this to my fiance? I've been away from him for 2 months now and it's absolutly killing both of us! I read this and I instantly thought of us. This poem just really means a lot to me. I liked the way it flowed and...well, I just liked it!
April

Doubt thou the stars are fire;
Doubt that the sun doth move;
Doubt truth to be a liar;
But never doubt I love.
~*~Shakespeare~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-07-14 01:09 AM

well i havent read much of your work so i cant say this is my favorite...but i do like it alot...keep on posting and ill keep reading...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

5 posted 2000-07-14 02:07 AM

Hope Dale knows how lucky he is. Loved your poem. Keep up the good work.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Phoebee
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 42
Peoria, AZ

6 posted 2000-07-14 12:56 PM

Thanks go out to all of you. April, go for it. I hope he enjoys it.

"Everything happens for a reason!"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-12-01 11:08 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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