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Hidden within her heart
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Hidden within her heart |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Hidden within her heart Is a love untold Hidden within her heart Is a story waiting to unfold Hidden within her soul Emotions go unseen Hidden within her soul All her wants and dreams Hidden within her mind Thoughts of the future and of the past Hidden within her mind The knowledge she turns to last Hidden within her spirit Freedom's voice still rings Hidden within her spirit The brokeness that heartache brings Hidden behind her eyes A fire that still burns bright Hidden behind her eyes Hope's holy light So she'll pick herself up And begin again from the start For there is strength we cannot see Hidden inside her heart -Thomas A. Plemmons < !signature--> "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- [This message has been edited by TAP2 (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This is a great poem, and I say that a lot, but I really don't know how else to describe what I want to say. You're poems are really well written, and it's great talent that won't go to waste. Kittie |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well what can i say??? i am becoming a really big fan of yours...you write so well...i like this poem alot...you have my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
If u keep up this outstanding writing, u'r going to have a lot of permanent fans. This is so, so untouchabley beautiful. Your poetry iz off the hook. I'm definetly going to be looking for more of your work. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Sleeping Beauty New Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 4Washington |
Your poem was so incredibly beautiful. It really hit me-that most things are hidden beneath the surface. Great job! |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
my hat's off to you sir! well composed poem. excellent rhythm and the way you manipulate the hidden theme is very good. i loved the last stanza. a good clincher! thanks for postin'.< !signature--> We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Interesting theme...did you pull that one out of your butt or what...j/k. I liked the quick stanzas and choppy rhythm. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You are so in a league of your own. jason  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I loved this one It really reminded me of a couple of things, one is a song I have heard, and the other was a poem my ex wrote about me after I went through a traumatic time. He wrote about how amazed he was that I had the ability to remain strong and over come it all. You really touched me with this one. Thanks for the beautiful writing |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
TAP .. I must say this poem you've versed has me quite immersed in the heartfelt expression you've penned so beautifully.  This belongs in the book Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I realy like your poem and i also enjoyed it. I hope to read more of your poems. Lovely_Kris |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I must say, I agree with Jason on this one!! your writing is outstanding!! you deserve a standing ovation! I'm kind of curious as to who this is about...? this person has some traits I would like to pick up on!! Anyways, how's everything goin?!!? good I hope!! well, better jet, keep it up hun! Love Ya! Love Always~*~Jess~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Thank you all so much for your kind words, of which I am undeserving. You are all my inspiration, my pathway to perfect passion. Thank you for the gift that you are. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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