Teen Poetry #3 |
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The Hunted |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
I, on the frozen tundra, of a faraway land have no fear. I've hunted here many times before, ive captured many prize trophies, of animals indiginous, and endangered alike. Never caring if the animal had cubs or not, or what it's like to be hunted- to be prey to something else. But now, as im in a small forest, i stop. I hear something. Little more than a rustling of leaves, but there... something. I continue, a little aprehensive, but not afraid. All is well, until i hear the noise again. Only louder this time, and seemingly closer. I turn around, hoping to catch any movement... nothing. I run a little faster now, visibly shaken eager to get out of this forest. I know now... something is stalking me. Im in full flight now, trying to escape It's still behind me, i can feel it...hear it... its footsteps like thunder, geting closer.... its cry, long, and primal, chilling enough to put terror into the strongest of men to awake the souls of men from their tombs... Im out of the forest now, out of reach of whatever it was stalking me. Safe at last. But wait.... now, new terrors await. They are partially hidden in the snowy mist, but still visible Lots of them, just like the stalkers in the forest. I see them clearly now, Teeth white as the fresh snow, against jet black coats out from the faces, peer eyes as cold as the tundra we stand on. Yes, i see them. figures as clear as day.... Wolves. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Excellent poem Driven! I felt like I was part of this for a moment ... very descriptive, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Impressive. The imaginative, and mind stimulating descriptions in this poem allows one to feel the apprehension of the hunter. Very well written. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow... this is great! I love how you turn the tables on the hunter to make him become the hunted. Wonderful writing, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Awesome poem! It gave me goosebumps! Very, very good writing. Most impressive. *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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