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InnermostBurn
New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-07-12 02:31 AM





"The only one for my heart"

The day has started,
the time is near again,
even though hours till,
my heart is anticipating your sight,
one of my best friends in the world,
i can trust you with my life,
but you have told me friendship is our only path,
hopefully, time will reveal,
what I believe god has intended us to be,
an old quote comes to mind,
"silence is golden",
but this type of silence is deafining,
tearing my soul apart,
and that you were put here to keep me together,
and I believe someday you will.



[This message has been edited by InnermostBurn (edited 07-12-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 InnermostBurn - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-07-12 05:37 AM


I have drown in this exact same ocean before.
For months, I wanted desparately to be with my good friend Tonya.  Eventually, we were and it only took her a few weeks to tear me down to a feeling I had had only once before.
We'll never be the same again, but I knew that if we didn't try, I'd never have been satisfied.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-12 07:07 AM


Welcome to Passions InnermostBurn!

This is a wonderful first post!
I do hope that "hopefully time will reveal your path"  

Hope to read more from you ... check your e-mail for a special message!

Best wishes,
/Kit

TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
3 posted 2000-07-12 10:06 AM


Very well written intro poem. Allow me to give you a warm welcome, your gonna feel right at home here. Hope to see more of your work soon.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2000-07-12 11:48 AM


this is one of the sweetest poems i've read.  great job and keep it up.  thanks for sharing....
"and that you were put here to keep me together, and i believe someday you will"
i love this line  

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-12 12:23 PM


excellent peice...

I throughly enjoyed reading it.

It all does get better, I spent an entire year totally infatuated with someone I knew I could never have, he was my best friend and an ex of a good friend of mine.... We never got together and in the long run that was for the best!!  
Keep smiling    everything will work out the way it should.  I hope you get that person of your dreams

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-07-12 12:29 PM


Beautiful poem, IB! You've expressed some strong emotions in this, and many of us know where you're coming from. Great job!  

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-07-12 02:53 PM


well i have only read 2 poems by you...but i am a big fan...this is a really good poem...keep up the good work...you got my vote...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36

8 posted 2000-07-12 02:55 PM


Absoultly wonderful!!! You have my vote

                     Love,
                      essenceofangels

"Look back on time with kindly eyes"
"A word is dead
When it is said,
Some say.
I say it just
Begins to live
That day."


Snickers
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT
9 posted 2000-07-12 04:25 PM


Outstanding!!! Welcome to Passions and with a talent like yours, u will definetly fit in well.  I think the topic of your poem hits home for a lot of ppl, so u aren't the only in u'r situation.  But trust fate to lead u in the right direction, b/c things will work out.  Sometimes it just takes time, patience, and unfortuantely, pain.  I wish you luck, and hope to see more of u'r work.

~<3 Alwayz~
  **Nikki**


~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~

Sleeping Beauty
New Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 4
Washington
10 posted 2000-07-12 06:11 PM


I really liked your poem.  That is exactly how I feel about my guy friend/crush.  Your poem really touched me, keep up the great work!


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2007-12-01 11:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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