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The only one for my heart
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The only one for my heart |
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InnermostBurn New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 2 |
"The only one for my heart" The day has started, the time is near again, even though hours till, my heart is anticipating your sight, one of my best friends in the world, i can trust you with my life, but you have told me friendship is our only path, hopefully, time will reveal, what I believe god has intended us to be, an old quote comes to mind, "silence is golden", but this type of silence is deafining, tearing my soul apart, and that you were put here to keep me together, and I believe someday you will. [This message has been edited by InnermostBurn (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I have drown in this exact same ocean before. For months, I wanted desparately to be with my good friend Tonya. Eventually, we were and it only took her a few weeks to tear me down to a feeling I had had only once before. We'll never be the same again, but I knew that if we didn't try, I'd never have been satisfied. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions InnermostBurn! This is a wonderful first post! I do hope that "hopefully time will reveal your path"  Hope to read more from you ... check your e-mail for a special message! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Very well written intro poem. Allow me to give you a warm welcome, your gonna feel right at home here. Hope to see more of your work soon. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is one of the sweetest poems i've read. great job and keep it up. thanks for sharing.... "and that you were put here to keep me together, and i believe someday you will" i love this line |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
excellent peice... I throughly enjoyed reading it. It all does get better, I spent an entire year totally infatuated with someone I knew I could never have, he was my best friend and an ex of a good friend of mine.... We never got together and in the long run that was for the best!! Keep smiling everything will work out the way it should. I hope you get that person of your dreams |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Beautiful poem, IB! You've expressed some strong emotions in this, and many of us know where you're coming from. Great job!  *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well i have only read 2 poems by you...but i am a big fan...this is a really good poem...keep up the good work...you got my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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essenceofangels Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36 |
Absoultly wonderful!!! You have my vote Love, essenceofangels "Look back on time with kindly eyes" "A word is dead When it is said, Some say. I say it just Begins to live That day." |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Outstanding!!! Welcome to Passions and with a talent like yours, u will definetly fit in well. I think the topic of your poem hits home for a lot of ppl, so u aren't the only in u'r situation. But trust fate to lead u in the right direction, b/c things will work out. Sometimes it just takes time, patience, and unfortuantely, pain. I wish you luck, and hope to see more of u'r work. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Sleeping Beauty New Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 4Washington |
I really liked your poem. That is exactly how I feel about my guy friend/crush. Your poem really touched me, keep up the great work! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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