navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Be There
Teen Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Be There Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-06-14 05:10 PM




Don't tell me that you understand, don't tell me that you know
Don't tell me that I will survive, how I will surely grow.
Don't tell me this is just a test, that I am truly blessed.
That I am chosen for this task, apart from all the rest
Don't come at me with answers that can only come from me,
Don't tell me how my grief will pass that I will soon be free
Don't stand in pious judgment of the bonds I must untie,
Don't tell me how to suffer, don't tell me how to cry,
My life is filled with selfishness, my pain is all I see,
But I need you, I need your love, unconditionally.
Accept me in my ups and downs, I need someone to share,
Just hold my hand and let me cry, and say, "My friend, I care."

© Copyright 2000 Jenna-Nicole Boutilier - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-06-14 06:05 PM


I LOVE IT!!! wonderfully put! I can completely relate. It's what I've been feeling but don't know how to say. keep it up!! Love ya Always~*~Jessica~*~  

 "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves."
"Bleeding hearts release tears of fire"
"work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last"

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-07-23 05:42 PM


ok guys i smell
i didnt write this poem my firend(HerMelness) did
but i told you that in an e-mail
jsut incase you didnt get it im posting this

[This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 07-23-2000).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-02 08:32 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Be There

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary