Teen Poetry #3 |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
Okies, these are just some poems I have scribbled in my notebook for my boyfriend but they are the way i feel towards him. Plus, we are getting married next year! Okay the first one was when we broke up for a bit and i hurt so much, i cried every night. I really hate to hurt you I really hate to make you sad Because whatever I say to you I feel the consequence too Because I'm bound to you In a certain special way That makes me love you even more Every single day. Okay next one was when I first wanted to go out with him. I wrote this on the back of a sale ticket at work and shoved it in his locker. It worked! Sounds as soft as a prayer But cuts as deep as a bullet It can take you places you've never been It could take you places you'd never wanna go But then, the choice is yours And when you're ready I'll be waiting to take you there |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
The first was filled with such sorrow, and I'm glad to hear things are better now~ the second was sweet and definately a sign of love. Keep up the good work! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ![]() ![]() *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
very good and i realy liked your poem. And i hope things go well for you. Lovely_Kris |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, this poem was very well written. The first one was sad, and the second touched my heart. I am glad everything is well again. And Congrats on your marriage!!! Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Those are very good poems. I wish you good luck with your marriage...keep writing and have fun! Love ya Danielle ![]() "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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