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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-07-11 07:24 PM


He doesn't realize
The amount of power he possess over me
He doesn't realize
How he hold me world in his hands
He doesn't realize
How I worry when he's not near
He doesn't realize
How I feel when he tells me all is ok

Everyday we smile, exchange hellos and laughs
We think of each other often and yet never express it
And as I rest my head on his shoulder
With his jacket laid carelessly over my shoulds I realize
He doesn't realize

Without him in my world it would be worthless
He is part of who I am
He is who I turn to for advice
I support him- and he reassures me
And although we feel it - it has never been said
He is my best friend


© Copyright 2000 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-11 07:29 PM


your life wouldnt be worthless without him in it...it would probably be boring but not worthless...so dont say that...this is a nice poem that you wrote for your best friend...why dont you give it to him then maybe he will realize what he is to you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-11 07:38 PM


I wrote this poem a long time ago when I thought I was in love with my best friend....

Back then I thought my life wouldb e worthless, now I realize it would be a little emptier, but not worthless...

I just write how I'm feeling at that given moment.

And he knows he's very important to me

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
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SD,CA 92126
3 posted 2000-07-11 08:11 PM


To much emotions for me..hehe just kidding
its a wonderful poem and you should always
express how you feel in any way to make him/her to relize! I loved it

     ~EroseGrover~

BABYFACE
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since 2000-07-09
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DALLAS,TX
4 posted 2000-07-11 09:19 PM


THAT WAS GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
BabyGirl1
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since 2000-07-02
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Morris, IL
5 posted 2000-07-11 10:12 PM


This is a great poem.  It is really hard when they 'don't realize.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Acies
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Twilight Zone
6 posted 2000-07-12 11:45 AM


sometimes you just can't expect a person to be able to read your mind and specially your feelings.  some things have to be said.  great poem....keep it up  
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
7 posted 2000-07-12 07:34 PM


one way streets are the worst ones to travel in a love bug, you know what i mean?  very well penned thoughts. i like your style. i've read two of your works and you have a very "tell-it-like-it-is" style. this is well done.
and i hate to do some monday-morning-quarterbacking, but maybe you should just tell him, and not wait for realization to kick in. =)

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Lovely_Kris
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8 posted 2000-07-12 11:44 PM


What a great poem. I think you did a great job.
lovely_kris

Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2000-07-13 10:45 AM


Thank you all for your kind words...

And to all of you who keep telling me to tell him....

It has been too long since I wrote this and he is now with a friend of mine, and I have fallen in love with another.

He knows he is a very important person in my life, and that will never change, but it's not a romantic love that I feel for him, but more of a brotherly love....

thanks again for all your kind words

Linzi
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 35
Pennsylvania, USA
10 posted 2000-07-13 10:49 AM


This is a wonderful poem, and it was particularly striking to me, because I'm in love with one of my very best friends right now, so I really understood this poem! Beautifuljob!

~*~Linzi~*~

"Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia


Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
11 posted 2000-07-21 12:09 PM


Linzi
thanks for your kind thoughts!!!

Whatever happens between you and your best friend, I'm sure it'll be for the best.  I hope you find great happiness.

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
12 posted 2000-07-22 02:10 PM


Kind and Sweet. I'm glad your friend knows how you feel about him. Just like Acire said, you can't expect any one to read your emotions, sometimes they have to be expressed. Just keep that in mind for future relationships...oh, and do you ever wonder what would have come of you two had to told him the way you felt? just curious. keep up the wonderful work! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
13 posted 2000-07-23 01:51 PM


Jessica
thanks for the response....
and no, I don't wonder what wouldh ave happened if I told him because I like the way things are right now....

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
14 posted 2007-12-02 08:32 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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