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EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-07-11 08:07 PM


The Sunrise beams extrodinary
colors through our sky

Sunshine fills our blessed land
and warms our naked hand

the clouds up above bring
more love to the day

The sweet wind blows so
swiftly and sleek bringing
our mind to a calm

As the Sunset brings our day adiu
it brings the blessed night sky with it to.


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BabyGirl1
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since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
1 posted 2000-07-11 10:25 PM


Beautiful poem.  I can see the sunrise and sunset through your words.  The sunset is one of my favorite times of day.  Loved it  

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-07-12 01:01 AM


Very beautiful words here.  I too love the sunrise and the sunset.  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-12 06:46 AM


Beautiful poem, and lovely sentiments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-01 10:58 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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