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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Since the day we met, Ive been in love with you. I cant believe this is happening, its like a dream come true. You make me feel special, and you make me feel loved. I am starting to wonder, are you an angel sent from above? You always put a smile, straight across my face. I guess you can say, my heart is in the right place. You say certain words, that help brighten up my day. And it all happens, in your own special way. I love you, with all my heart and soul. And that is the reason, I dont ever want to let you go. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem. I'm so glad that you've been found someone who was "sent from above". "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
~Erin~ What a Beautiful poem I can see It comes from the heart and thouse are the best kind of poems! |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Congradulations first on finding love, and secondly, for writing a beautifull poem. Keep it up, and don't fall out of love, cause it sucks. jason |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Erin~ok so I've been gone for a couple of days, I come back and you astonish me with this work of excellence!! Girl, this is beautiful! I'm so glad you're happy in love, just wish I could say the same. Keep it up my dear and best of luck with you new found love. Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOVEBUG~~~well thank you for the comments...i feel quite proud that you are giving me such comments...since you are up there on top... EROSE~~~thank you too...yes this poem did come straight from my heart...from the person who makes me feel like this... JACMAN~~~i understand what your saying about falling out of love...it sucks big time...thanks for the positive comments on my poem... STARPRYNCESS~~~i was wondering where you were cuz i havent seen any new poems by you lately...and what do you mean that you wish you could feel the same??? i thought that you and chris??? were together??? is that his name??? whats going on with that??? thank you for the comments... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I loved the poem. I know the feeling. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
It's great to love, isn't it? Sometimes it is hard to find words to describe what you are feeling, at least for me. You did a wonderful job. I couldn't have done better myself. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
CHEL~~~thanks for replying... PHOEBEE~~~yeah it is great...i know what you are saying...sometimes it is hard to find the right words...thanks for replying... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Know exactly how you feel. The love of my life and mother of our child, makes me feel the same way. Hold on to this person , it's not easy to find someone like that these days. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Great poem Erin! I'm not sure how it goes in English, but it comes down to: what your heart is full of, shows in everything you do and say. Keep up the good writing.  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
its nice erin....wishes for a happy love filled life... sincerely a_l |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thank you guys all for the replies...i guess that this poem should be good enough to print out and give to my boyfriend and show him what he really means to me... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
Im a girl my dear |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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